Sarah Day

Ann provided a structural edit of the first 8000 words of my manuscript as a trial service.

I was very impressed with her detailed advice, which confirmed my own suspicions and provided a lot of suggestions I hadn’t considered.

It was such a boost to receive high quality guidance as I had shown my manuscript to many other people and had been disappointed with the lack of useful feedback I received.

I consequently asked Ann to appraise the entire manuscript and am very happy to now feel that I am in a position to develop my novel to a publishable quality.

Ann’s detailed feedback on the manuscript addressed many elements including structure, plot, characterisation, pace, point of view, language, dialogue and setting.

The report provided a comprehensive guide as to where I should go from here and what aspects of the novel require work.

After feeling lost in the woods, I am now excited about fixing the structure and improving certain passages of writing, after which time I plan to engage Ann to do a full copy edit.

Ann really understood the work and provided very clear direction and encouragement. I can’t believe the value I received for such an affordable rate.

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